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Honey3223 |
1. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 21 2009, 5:27 PM EST
I'm enjoying this story very much. Your original characters and world make it worth looking forward to. Cant wait to see what else you have in store for us.
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Liz03 |
2. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 21 2009, 8:31 PM EST
wow great chapter..please keep them coming cant wait to see what happens..
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TeamSam |
3. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 21 2009, 10:17 PM EST
Again, great chapter. I am really getting hooked on these characters!! I know I'm greedy, but please update soon!!! Hmmmm, Scott or Alex?? Well since Scott can't get off his butt and make his move.... Alex may get the girl!! :)
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Laura-K |
4. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 21 2009, 10:58 PM EST
Is the dialog flowing and the imagery good?
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Laura-K |
5. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 22 2009, 6:30 PM EST
I didn't write chapter 6 yet but I made some minor changes to the chapters last night. This is a work in progress so as I add things the story might change some. There may be an addition of new characters in old chapters, I will try and keep you updated on any changes I make. Thanks for reading!
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Honey3223 |
6. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 22 2009, 7:28 PM EST
"Is the dialog flowing and the imagery good?"The story is great. I am getting hooked on the characters also and the imagery is working great. Pulls you in nicely. Great work. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Laura-K |
7. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 23 2009, 7:51 AM EST
I posted Chapter 6, sorry it is hard to read. I had it formatted and when I posted it I clumped up on the left margin.1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Liz03 |
8. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 23 2009, 11:52 AM EST
THanks for the chapter..i love this story..i cant wait to read the next one.. I wish this was a book cant get enough so different..
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Laura-K |
9. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 25 2009, 8:01 AM EST
Chapter 7 is up. Hope you guys like it.
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Laura-K |
10. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 25 2009, 2:37 PM EST
"Chapter 7 is up. Hope you guys like it."Chapter 7 is Avery and the Lumpy Couch-Synopsis: Avery spends the day with Elle and the night with Scott 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Laura-K |
11. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 25 2009, 6:53 PM EST
I am going crazy! I don't know how I feel about chapter 7 and no one is talking today! Do you like it? Is it too long or draggy? Should I be more explicit with the last part? I want to write it tastefully but still get the point across.
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celticdee |
12. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 25 2009, 7:36 PM EST
"I am going crazy! I don't know how I feel about chapter 7 and no one is talking today! Do you like it? Is it too long or draggy? Should I be more explicit with the last part? I want to write it tastefully but still get the point across."Oh Babe, don't fret. I read it earlier today before I started messing around with the chores, and just re-read it. I'm an Avery fan, and really appreciate how you've developed her character and introduced Clete, the Rorys, Scott, Alex and Elle. Please do continue with this story. It's not at all draggy. You've really got me hooked. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Laura-K |
13. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 25 2009, 8:38 PM EST
"Oh Babe, don't fret. I read it earlier today before I started messing around with the chores, and just re-read it.Thanks, I needed the reassurance. I was worried I was losing the flow. 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Liz03 |
14. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 25 2009, 9:59 PM EST
Just read the last chapter it was great..I love Avery and the rest of them very different please keep going this is such a great story...
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Laura-K |
15. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 26 2009, 2:32 PM EST
i posted chapter 8. I can't believe I have 8 of them. lol. I have it typed out on word in courier new 12pt with double spacing (I read somewhere that it is easier on the eyes that way) and there are like 244 pages or something. I have only been doing this for about 10 days! This is the first purely creative thing I have worked on, and I have never written anything this long or involved.
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celticdee |
16. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 26 2009, 3:41 PM EST
"i posted chapter 8. I can't believe I have 8 of them. lol. I have it typed out on word in courier new 12pt with double spacing (I read somewhere that it is easier on the eyes that way) and there are like 244 pages or something. I have only been doing this for about 10 days! This is the first purely creative thing I have worked on, and I have never written anything this long or involved."Well, Laura, I think you have proven to us that you are a gifted writer. Don't stop now. Ignore the number of pages completed and just let your creativity flow. Before you know it you'll have a very decent sized book ready for the publishers. Go girl! 1 out of 1 found this valuable. Do you? |
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Liz03 |
17. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 27 2009, 11:34 AM EST
great chapter (serpent), like Scott but I think I would like her with Clete or even Alex..please continue cant wait to see what happens..
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Honey3223 |
18. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 28 2009, 6:37 PM EST
I'm really enjoying this story. You are gifted at keeping your readers engrossed with your words. Keep it going.
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Laura-K |
19. RE: Honey and gunpowder
Jan 29 2009, 6:47 AM EST
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What do you think of the guys in the story?
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