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Alcide~Sookie
Title : My Night with Alcide
Author: FreyaWarriorMaiden
Date: 10/17/2009
Current location: East Coast
Rated (T, M, MA): Mature
Content (E/S, S/B, etc.): AL/S
Synopsis: After Alcide rescinded Eric's invitation into his apartment leaving Sookie and Alcide alone. From the Club Dead Novel chapter 6 ~ this time Alcide does not walk away.
My Night with Alcide

"This story is based on a compilation of discussion posts started in Trublood, The RPG, Southern Vampires, that I wrote along with another member of our role playing group, Alcide. With his permission I have turned them into the following story for fans to enjoy. I enjoyed the ability to take the scene Charlaine created and build on the Alcide and Sookie's desire for each other. Hope you enjoy this as much as we did."

By FreyaWarriorMaiden

Disclaimer: I don’t own the Southern Vampires. Sole copyright belongs to Charlaine Harris. I am only expanding on her characters for my enjoyment and my fellow lovers of Sookie Stackhouse and her story.

Rating: M

Time~frame: Club Dead (After the incident at the Club and they are back at Alcide's apartment.)

Pairing: Alcide/Sookie

Summary: Eric's invitation has been rescinded and he departs through the window leaving Alcide and Sookie to contemplate timing again.

(My story begins at the ***) ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Chapter 6

Club Dead by Charlaine Harris

Quote:

Alcide slammed the the window shut and let the blinds back down.

"No, there are lots of men who don't like me at all." I told him. He'd been easy to read that time, all right.

He gave me an odd look. "Is that so?"

"Yes it is."

"If you say so."

"Most people, regular people, that is ... they think I'm nuts."

" Is that right?"

"Yes, that's right! And it makes them very nervous to have me serve them."

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"To serve them?" Alcide said and chuckled.

Why didn't he have a shirt on? I just could not stop staring at his shoulders, those big, wide, and strong muscled shoulders. Resting his hands on his hips, I finally got the full view of his biceps and noticed they were big enough for me to do pull ups on.

"It’s my disability that makes them feel like that you know?" I tried to look at anything but Alcide's naked chest and that silky curly hair all over it, snaking its way to a perfect V down into those drawstring pants.

I knew Alcide was well aware of the affect he was having on me.

He could smell her desire with his keen senses, and that scent was having an effect on him as well. Closing the brief distance between them Alcide pulled me into his arms and kissed me softly.

He seemed unsure at first and I thought he was he waiting for me to stop the kiss, but I encircled his neck with my arms and he deepened the kiss swinging me up into his arms. To hell with timing he thought, carrying her to his bedroom.

“Let me serve you Sookie.”

His tongue teased her lips until she parted them to allow his tongue access to hers. I closed my eyes, welcoming his kisses; his lips were so incredibly warm. Serve me? Oh Shepherd of Judea, what did he mean? My mind was spinning like a top from those wonderful full lips trailing over my neck and returning to my lips.

His tongue found mine and it teased it, sending gooseflesh all over my body. Alcide's body was shuddering; I knew he was holding back his full passion because he didn't want to scare me. He was staring at me, wanting me to relax and open to him completely.

Alcide slowly set my feet on the floor, my body sliding down his as we stood next to his bed. “Look at me Sookie.” Looking up at him through a haze of desire, I swallowed any reservations I may have been harboring and accepted this beautiful man as my third lover.

“Alcide?” It was a question and a answer.

He tilted his head and pressed his lips against mine, murmuring tender words over and over. He kissed my hair, my cheeks, and ran butterfly kisses along my neck. I began to shiver under his touch.

He laid me down on the bed slowly untying my robe. My pink nightgown had decided to ride up around my waist giving Alcide access to my bare stomach as the robe fell apart exposing my bare skin.

My God he was so warm and so big I was almost afraid he was going to hurt me. But he was setting me on fire and the blaze was burning deep inside, building up, reaching, and gasping for release.

His hands moved inside my nightgown, caressing my back slowly and gently while lifting it up and over my head. One of his hands took on a life of its own sliding over my breast and tweaking the nipple until it hard to his touch. His mouth followed and when his hot tongue touched my breast, I gave a little shriek followed by a deep moan. I could not tell where his lips ended and his hands began. The fire creeping up from the core of my body was so hot I felt like I would explode from the tension building inside me. His body felt like it was on fire and that heat was electrifying every part of my body. My hips began to move sideways as his fingers trailed along the top of my thighs begging for him to touch me. Reaching out to run my fingers through his thick curly hair and pulling his head tighter to breast in an attempt to get him closer than he already was.

Alcide pulled back slightly, licking his lips, “I want to taste you.” His eyes appeared to glow and green was somewhat golden with the passion and desire lurking behind them.

“Is that something you desire?” I could barely nod yes while he moved to the side of the bed pulling me with him. He positioned my legs over the side of the mattress, opening my thighs and knelt down between my legs.

“Lay back my sweet. I want to see all of you.” He kissed my stomach again sending waves of shivers through me once more. His fingers were no longer trailing along the top of my thighs but slowly sliding inside me.

“You are so wet and tight.” He whispered in a hoarse voice. "You have not been with many men have you?"

He growled and slid two of his large fingers back and forth inside me while sliding his thumb over my clit. Unable to contain myself I moaned in anticipation when his deft fingers opened me wider and his head began to lower to my wetness. He hovered for a brief moment over me and I thought he was sniffing the air as his licked his beautiful lips. Alcide looked into at me, intently till he was only a tongue length apart from my body. My breathing was ragged and my hands once again moved into the curly hair on his head. Alcide lifted one of my legs over his shoulder and barely touched me with his tongue and the golden waves of ecstasy began to flood over me in anticipation. Trying not to writhe too wildly, I was unable to hold onto any sanity as his began to slowly lick, suck, and explore every inch of my womanhood. Bits of lightning were edging in from the sides of my consciousness and I knew within moments I would be on the outer edges of desire from this beautiful man’s touch. Shuddering and shaking like never before, I felt blissful.

Alcide picked up both my legs and wrapped them around his waist. He positioned himself above me and plunged deep inside. He captured my gasp with his mouth, and began slowly to ride while I matched him stroke for stroke.

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FreyaWarriorMaiden My Night with Alcide 2 Nov 1 2009, 1:01 AM EDT by loltrublood
Thread started: Oct 17 2009, 9:46 PM EDT  Watch
This is my first FanFic and I truly hope everyone enjoys this as much my Alcide and I did putting it together. Looking forward to you feedback. If you enjoy we have more.

Cheers,

Freya and Alcide
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FreyaWarriorMaiden Thanks... 0 Oct 31 2009, 7:14 PM EDT by FreyaWarriorMaiden
Thread started: Oct 31 2009, 7:14 PM EDT  Watch
I really thank you. It was my first writing attempt and with learning the system and all I completely overlooked that. *Bows*

Freya~
MrsNorthmn feedback 0 Oct 23 2009, 4:17 PM EDT by MrsNorthmn
Thread started: Oct 23 2009, 4:17 PM EDT  Watch
Hello there,

I may just be being picky, but I did want to let you know that you are switching persons throughout your story. For instance, you start out with Sookie telling the story from her point of view in first person saying "I..." then you switch abruptly to 3rd person omniscient using "he" or "she". It happens immediately:

"I knew Alcide was well aware of the affect he was having on me.

He could smell her desire with his keen senses, and that scent was having an effect on him as well. Closing the brief distance between them Alcide pulled me into his arms and kissed me softly."

See what I mean? The story will flow better if you stick to one way or the other. I personally don't have a preference of what person you use to tell the story as long as you stick to it throughout.

Just trying to be helpful!! :)
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